Soliciting Opinions...The story of the Seekers as heroes and adventurers of Cybertron comes from chapter 6 of 'Young Turks', which was published in 1/17/08 - I'm NOT changing 'Turks' at all. No way, no how. The story of the Seekers stays the same, period. 'Turks' does cross over with 'Countdown', and I'm not going to change that part either; regardless of the similarity to the movie.
The main part that I think I want to change is the messages in Cybertronian left on the pyramids (Mexican pyramids, not Egyptian, even though I did consider putting them there - but I thought that would be too obvious). It doesn't seem like this would be a problem, except that I was going to have Cybertronian writing left on other human-made monuments and that is a rather integral part of the story. (I established the idea of Cybertronian symbols on monuments in 'Countdown' in chapter 4: 'The First Artifact', which was published on 12/23/07.) The other parts on the chopping block are the use of stars to locate certain objects (established in 'Countdown' on 1/25/08) and the use of prophesies (established in chapter 1 and published 12/01/07). The ending will need to be changed as well, but I'm not telling anyone about that - my bad guys are WAY cooler than the Fallen, btw. >.>
So this is what I'm asking: Should I change aforementioned parts or should I leave everything alone and continue my slow transcription from notebook to computer?
I know I should go with what feels the best, but frankly, I'm not sure what feels right. I'm mad enough to change it because some of the ideas are not original anymore, but I am loath to just toss out all that work.
If you guys were in my position, what would you do?
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On another note: I can't tell if I'm getting better. Typing is tedious and it's taken me almost an hour just to write this much. I'm in a lot of pain today and I'm feeling worn out. My brain won't settle down and it's full of ideas that I can't get down on paper or Notepad. In other words - meh.
Pain
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6am the time when the sunrises and the sky turns the most wonderful red, pink and yellow and then the birds, the wonderful birds who sing there song so beautiful, then a door opens and a gunshot goes out and the birds thump and we can go back to sleep.
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6am the time when the sunrises and the sky turns the most wonderful red, pink and yellow and then the birds, the wonderful birds who sing there song so beautiful, then a door opens and a gunshot goes out and the birds thump and we can go back to sleep.
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I deeply desire to be extricated from the dualities, from the judgments; I want to be at the level where it is all about learning instead.
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